Hexelbit's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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The motives are very often repeated, if look at a lot of your works, you can see that it's all one big pattern. As a simple art - not bad, as a work of art - very mediocre. A lot of the place is empty, there is no contrast, it's just a set of unrelated things. Personally, I would like to see smoother lines with color that would contrast well with black (dirty and torn). It would be also possible to experiment with the position (from the side, from above, etc.). It is possible, probably, to experiment with more colors, well, and try to fill more space. But nevertheless, I am not an artist and have never considered myself to be such, just a look from the ordinary viewer. However, as for me, the style can potentially be very, very unique and cool! However, so far I only see repetitions.

ForgottenDawn responds:

Hi, thanks for your feedback. I appreciate the "ordinary viewer" input, as well as your attempt to decode the solution that is the artwork itself. Personally, I have a lot of fun drawing these, as it's more about the process than the final result. As for your suggestions, I may take them in consideration for other types of works not involving this level of formal research since, well, that's what they are, and that's how I'd like them to be.

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