Слушай, это круто! Прогрессия очень похожа на машин герл. Я прям ждал что пойдут какие-нибудь быстрые атональные корд плаки. Единственное, наверное, к чему бы я придрался - не хватает панча в барабанах, имхо, они тут все примерно на одной частоте типо, хеты не сильно высокие, снейр довольно басистый и кик, ему прям не хватает панча, я бы тут немного поднял бы хеты, и накинул бы на них делея с ревером что бы сильно не выделялись, кик бы я взял бы либо прям конкретную вату типо атмосферного техно, либо что то более клубное аля хаус. Ну и неуверен, но снейру я бы попробовал срезать конкретный низ. Хотя возможно я сильно придираюсь))) Ну короче очень даже атмосферненько :)

Pretty good, for the first time in vocals. I remember when I was trying to learn to play the guitar and tried to sing, it seems to me that I did not hit one note, so to speak, an anti record))). Great job! :D

The arrangement and mixing are quite weak. Remember once and for all, mixing in all modern genres = 80% of the sound. Use reverb, a lot of reverb, and you need to do something with the drums, they're a little weak here. And one more thing, the more complicated your drums are, the simpler everything else is, in your case, in general, melodies should be hyper simple, or they should not be at all. But in general, I want to wish you good luck, do not give up, there are no talents, there is only constancy and perseverance :)

The motives are very often repeated, if look at a lot of your works, you can see that it's all one big pattern. As a simple art - not bad, as a work of art - very mediocre. A lot of the place is empty, there is no contrast, it's just a set of unrelated things. Personally, I would like to see smoother lines with color that would contrast well with black (dirty and torn). It would be also possible to experiment with the position (from the side, from above, etc.). It is possible, probably, to experiment with more colors, well, and try to fill more space. But nevertheless, I am not an artist and have never considered myself to be such, just a look from the ordinary viewer. However, as for me, the style can potentially be very, very unique and cool! However, so far I only see repetitions.

Talented people are talented in everything! :D